Tuesday, October 8, 2013
The Princess's Choice
Without the slightest hesitation, he went to the door on the right, and opened it. Suddenly there were joyous cheers all around the arena because behind that door was the lady. The princess wept even though she knew she had made the right choice. She didn't want to lose him but she couldn't stand to send him to his death. As the man was wedded to the lady he was sad that he was separated from the princess but he was glad that he wasn't dead. He was happy with the woman because she was very pretty. The princess was sad for a while but found another man and was happy. She was not as happy as she would have been but she was still happy. The princess made a choice and it made everyone happy.
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Steven,
ReplyDeleteI liked how your post was straight to the point on the mans decision and the outcome. However towards the end you were a little redundant.
I liked how you had suspense in the ending. I also liked how it was straight to the point
ReplyDeleteSteven,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your story. I like that they didn't end up together but they didn't do something like kill themselves (Romeo & Juliet) if they can't be together. They moved on with their lives, like people do in real life.